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Open Poetry #12

Patiently I'm Waiting

Casonova
Junior Member

since 2000-04-29

Posts 35
Mays Landing

0 posted 2001-02-10 01:43 PM

Patiently I'm waiting,
  For you to come to me,
Quietly I'm listening,
  To loves simple plea.
Carefully I'm following,
  The fragile path to thee.
Dilegently I'm seeking,
  The perfect wife to be.
Breathlessly I'm offreing,
  My only hearts key
Despreatly I'm hoping,
  That you will not flee
Shamelessly I'm begging,
  As I'm on bended knee,
Silently I'm waiting.
  Will you marry me?

If you were wondering, No, I'm not getting married. But I am constantly writing poems about all kinds of diffrent subjects, that I have not gone through yet, and this just happend to be one of them.. Although I do look forward to the time when I can ask the girl I love, this verry question.. Take care...

                                                                         -Casanova

[This message has been edited by Casonova (edited 02-10-2001).]

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-02-10 02:27 PM

If you ask like this, expect a swift positive response!

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-02-10 02:34 PM

I agree with Sunshine........this is a huge *SIGH*......love it......

-SEA

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

3 posted 2001-02-10 02:47 PM

oh phooey! this wasn't a REAL marriage proposal? it seemed so authentic and i thought, how romantic to propose at Passions in front of the whole world!!!

well, anyway, i enjoyed it...

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2001-02-13 05:55 PM

Nice to practice..James

Agent696_DS
Junior Member

since 2001-01-31

Posts 33
NY, USA

5 posted 2001-02-13 06:05 PM

I like it You will find your true love keep the hope alive. There is someone out there for you.

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