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Daniel J D
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0 posted 2001-02-10 04:03 AM



The Wonder of Love!

At the closing of daytime
When sunset loomed upon the horizon
Your hand in mine, our hearts in unison
Warming each other's soul with passion
As the ocean of love beached an embrace
And as our lips met in a moment of silence
We were bonded in the wonder of love

Love so pure and beautiful
Love so clear and natural
Love demanding an encore
Love only two can explore

At the rising of the day
When sunrise's heat opened our eyes
Your hand in mine, our love for each other
On this beautiful morning began to last forever
Our souls had experienced the wonder of love
In the garden called earth, where daffodils
Attract butterflies, and where canaries
Whistle the tunes of love's melodies
Just as angels of love strummed their harps in harmony
Singing, "The Wonder of Love", meant for you and me


Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

© Copyright 2001 Daniel J D Ringuet - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2001-02-10 04:10 AM


A "Valentine" dream, m'friend...gentle, sweet, and lovely...
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2 posted 2001-02-10 05:42 AM


oh my dear friend, loved these treat of love, the sweet imagery within....wonderful done

((hugs))
Charisma

ATelamon
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3 posted 2001-02-10 05:53 AM


Reminds me of "a dream hidden by sleep".

But a sweet dream surely.

Well said.

snowpants
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4 posted 2001-02-10 09:56 AM


'At the closing of daytime
When sunset loomed upon the horizon
Your hand in mine, our hearts in unison
Warming each other's soul with passion'

Beautifully romantic images here, Daniel!  Love it!

sp


...if I ride these dreams to the Irish Sea,
oh, even there, I know your heart rides with me...

Irish Rose
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5 posted 2001-02-10 12:43 PM


This is a beautiful poem of love and so needed to be shared, back to the top for you!

"I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis



Daniel J D
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6 posted 2001-02-11 09:57 PM


Serenity,
Thank you for the kind words, reflects your inner feelings well.

Charisma,
You are a real charm, thank you so very much.

ATelemon,
Thanks, I am so glad the apperance was such, pleased you enjoyed this.

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