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Chelsea~
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0 posted 2001-02-09 09:21 PM




Though pictures fade and youth starts to decay
time could never steal you away
memories of first love will never part
now, touch my heart
it beats so tender
helping you to smile in sweet remember


© Copyright 2001 Chelsea Mcbrie - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 2001-02-09 09:37 PM


Oh, this is lovely! Welcome to the family. I hope you enjoy your time here. Please check your email for a special welcome.  
Janet Marie
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2 posted 2001-02-10 12:13 PM


Hi Chelsea~
Welcome to Passions...
love the cadence of your sweet poem of devotion
well done...
so nice to have you here ...  
I look forward to more of your work
take care
jm

Heaven bound on wings of love,
there's so much that you can rise above.
I surrender heart and soul,
sacrificed to a higher goal.
~DepechMode~

ATelamon
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3 posted 2001-02-10 08:01 AM


To the point and said with a light delicacy, makes this a pleasure to read.

Mendy
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4 posted 2001-02-10 10:18 AM


Welkom

Love the poem

if it is true that the world talks toomuch then let us all keep quiet and hear the eloquence of silence - Richard Ntiru

BloomingRose
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5 posted 2001-02-10 10:46 AM


Hi,Welcome to Passions! I know you will love it here.
Nice poem. Looking forward to reading more of yours.
Deb  

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on the horizon of a fairytale
6 posted 2001-02-10 12:04 PM


welcome...
I love the rhythm in this piece, very sweet and nicely done.


May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat...

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
7 posted 2001-02-10 01:45 PM


Chelsea...welcome to Passions! This was lovely...so brief, but so many, many gifts presented...

well done!

Charisma
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8 posted 2001-02-10 01:50 PM


Welcome to passions, and I really enjoyed your wonderful entrance..
well done.

Charisma

David2
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9 posted 2001-02-10 02:24 PM


Hi Chelsea,
   Welcome to Passions and thanks for your excellent poem.
                 David2

SEA
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with you
10 posted 2001-02-10 03:02 PM


Chelsea~ WELCOME!!!  This is a lovely first post........... -SEA
Honeybee
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11 posted 2001-02-10 06:26 PM



Welcome to Passions! This was lovely    

Take care,
Melissa~


The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams

~Melissa P. Monette~



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12 posted 2001-02-10 06:30 PM


Chelsea~
A delightful entrance.
Welcome to the family circle of poets and friends.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Sven
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13 posted 2001-02-10 08:03 PM


welcome. . . this is wonderful. . .

nothing like a memory. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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