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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Snuggled and protective, Inside warm cocoon, Woven in silk and inventive, Dreaming under the moon, Dreaming of only the past, Feeding off an old life, Unsure of how long it will last, Away from everyone, shutting out light, Lonely of living here, Darkness your only friend, Dreams of what once were, Living one step closer to end, Pushing your way out, Leaving the shadows, Two beauiful wings now, To fly over meadows. ~Maria~ [This message has been edited by Moon Dust (edited 02-09-2001).] |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Moon Dust, This is beautiful. Your imagery is enchanting... Elise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MoonDust~ Oh ... YES ! Such comfort in the nourishment of the cocoon - giving strenghth for the awaited flight. Fly - soar ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
it's nice to be inside the coccoon for a while. . . but it's nicer to come out. . . wonderful Moon Dust. . .  ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
How did this slip past me, I enjoyed every line. Kathleen Blake "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Very nice! I really enjoyed it. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
You described it well, Moon Dust. Look out world!!! LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
anthea - thanks, means a lot. Marge - yeah good thing come of it too Sven - yep think I'll stay in a bit longer tho Kathleen - Thanks muchly. Trillum - Thank you too. Lone Wolf - I know look out world thanks Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning. |
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