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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-02-09 05:01 PM



No Longer Needed

I no longer worry about Valentine's Day
nor the messages spread world round.
I no longer expect that one reddish rose
that grew from the love of earth's ground.

I only believe in the words and the deeds
that can show me I'm worthy, your love.
In return you will have the most wonderful me
you could ever, would ever dream of.

I'll pamper your mind as I do unto you
all the "do unto's" you'd like me to.
In return I'll expect that you'll rain me the same
as we share each day, as if new.

Then the gifts for that day, will be plenty and few
wrapped in feelings of heart, yours and mine.
Together, forever we'll share with each kiss
a reminder for each, Valentine.

©Maureen/~Wynter
2*07*00






"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



© Copyright 2001 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2001-02-09 05:05 PM


Nakd,
Wonderful write, Enjoyed the read. Sy

Poeminister
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2 posted 2001-02-09 05:10 PM


Beautiful thoughts in these words.  Nicely penned.

Poeminister

nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2001-02-10 08:24 AM


Sy, thank you for reading, sometimes I think holidays are not what they use to be, too much is made out of them when everyday should feel as wonderful as one can make it, it's feelings that count ...~S~


Poeminister, ~Smiling~ because it's the beautiful thoughts I do try to hold onto...hugzz for yours.
~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
4 posted 2001-02-10 05:09 PM


Wynter - I would present you with one red rose, for one of your beautiful smiles.

BC

DawnG
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5 posted 2001-02-10 07:48 PM


Wynter,

This is truly beautiful. Being with the ones I love means all the world to me, not the material things.  

                         Dawn

Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 2001-02-10 08:03 PM


Ah Maureen, good to see your words again friend.  You and I both know it is not the material things that make us happy, it's what is in the heart.  Wonderful as always Wynter.    

Enjoy life...this is NOT a dress rehearsal.  

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (edited 02-10-2001).]

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