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Marsha
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0 posted 2001-02-09 01:26 PM


I Am Puck

When things aren’t going as they should
And you want to shout if only you could
Nothing has gone right at all in your day
And you feel as if you’ve lost your own way
That’s when I’ll come and pay a visit to you
You shake your head thinking I’m not true
But I am Puck that mischievous little sprite
Who brings a smile and doesn’t use spite

When the coffee is cold when you need hot
And you find yourself in a very tricky spot
When things look bleak and rather dim
And looking around you all seems so grim
Then I’ll pop out to brighten up your day
I’ll bring some funshine to make you sway
Because I am Puck that mischievous elf
Who doesn’t like to see smiles on a shelf

When all around you are blowing a fuse
And you think this race for life you’ll lose
When times are hard and you need luck
Don’t you worry or fret just call for Puck
Then I’ll come and bring you some sun
I’ll bring you some joy mixed up with fun
Because I am Puck that mischievous imp
Who brightens you up when you’re so limp

Marsha



Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



© Copyright 2001 Marsha Grace Melody Todd - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-02-09 01:34 PM


Puck the brightish of imps
causes me to stumple and limp
though the cause of churlish laughter...
Puck knows what it is after!...

Well done Marsha!


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2 posted 2001-02-09 01:38 PM


Well hello Puck. . . my you're cute. . .  

Love this one Marsha. . . it's wonderful. . .

-------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Kethry
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3 posted 2001-02-10 04:25 AM


Mushy,
you are indeed!
What a very Puckish response to life.  Now let me Puck you in and read a bedtime story.
I'm stuck on Puck
Kethry


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



Daniel J D
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4 posted 2001-02-10 06:17 AM


Marsha,
Well done. Very good writing there. Hugs.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Charisma
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5 posted 2001-02-10 06:37 AM


Well I think that I could use the compagny of Puck...my coffee is a bit cold now, so can you come over than...


wonderful done my friend, enjoyed these excellent piece.

((hugs))
Charisma

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6 posted 2001-02-10 06:53 AM


Having spent some time in the Imp's role I must say, all we who answer to Puck and other Impish names, resoundingly cry bravo. A major blow for Impdom has been wrought.

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7 posted 2001-02-10 08:39 AM


Kari dear heart and Puck has more luck   I think we need to see more of Puck, don't you   Nooooo honestly I'll be good, well, goodish
Love as always
                    Puck
                      
Sven dear heart,   Thank you love, and now I'll pack Puck off, to write some more, I wonder does Puck pucker up
well if she does then pucker up too

Love as always
                    Bubbles
                      Mushy
                       Puck
                          
Kethry dear heart, good because I love your stories, and the stories I hear so often aren't the ones I want to. But yours are wonderful.
                    Love as always
   and thank you love
         take care
                      Slushy
        
                        
Daniel love, Thank you truly you know I always appreciate seeing friends drop by,
Take care love as always
                      Mushy
                        
Charisma love, thank you I'll be right over okay? Thank you dear heart
I need to bring some funshine with me  
Love as always take care
                     Mushy
                        

AT, thank you, this was just a bit of fun for some of my friends here. I can't imagine why they think I'm really Puck, I never ever behave like that. (They all know me far too well, I am very Puckish it's true!) But I'm not really dangerous ask anyone! On second thoughts don't, they are all perfidious and treacherous and will tell you dreadful tales about me.
Welcome to Passions I know I'm late welcoming you, but better late than never.
Take care love
                    Mushy
                     Puck
                  Marsha
                        


And while thy willing soul transpires
At every pore with instant fire

Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

Nan
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8 posted 2001-02-10 09:40 AM


I know this little impish elf that needs a name...



Cute poem, Marsha..

nakdthoughts
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9 posted 2001-02-10 10:00 AM


enjoyed the  writing, Marsha  but had to tell you my first thoughts were of the "Puck" from MTV...and The Real World because of your title
***made a mistake I meant Puck not punk  sorry didnt  check my spelling *s


well haven't had cable since then...hugzz

very nicely written.

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II




[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 02-11-2001).]

doreen peri
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10 posted 2001-02-10 12:17 PM


well, marsha! you are one kind eflin to think of this and write it down and offer your help for some very lucky person....

.... i'm not puck, like you.... pucked up sometimes, but... oh never mind  

enjoyed the read.. thank you

Beverley
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11 posted 2001-02-11 11:56 AM


Doreen love, that's what us sprites do love, not as pretty as fairies but infinitely more fun.  
And remember Puck is always there if you need me you just shout, and I'll pop on out  
Take care love as always
                  Mushy
                    


And while thy willing soul transpires
At every pore with instant fire

Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

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12 posted 2001-02-11 07:07 PM


Marsha, I have a resident Puck at my house!  I know it is relation to yours. I love this and know your friend well!  Hugs,  ME
Marsha
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13 posted 2001-02-12 08:41 AM


Nan love, sorry I missed you out, he looks like he's full of mischief, and he and I could be friends.
Utterly wonderful pic I like him. And thank you kindly
Take care as always
                     Mushy
                        
Wynter love, glad you liked it, well now you know Puck is really me   and he's a she. I know Willie boy wrote him as a male but I'm sure he wouldn't mind me altering his script just a bit. (Anyway he can't complain to me so I'm content   )
Sorry I didn't say thank you earlier. and I'm pleased you dropped by.
Take care love as always
                    Mushy
                      
ME love, thank you so you know what Puck is  
Take care love
                        Mushy
                          


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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