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The forbidden door is opened - When you have to face the truth
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The forbidden door is opened - When you have to face the truth |
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Fee Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 381Melbourne, Australia |
Conversations late at night and topics shared too How could we pretend so hard when both of us knew. Years we have pretended that friends is all we were, The whole time we were lying to save us from the hurt. Well the door is finaly open the room is full of doubt. We have both admitted and let our emotions out. The bond is so much stronger as the guards are finaly down but where does this leave us - confusion all around. Its not just as simple as we both know for if we are to let our emotions go. There are others involved which makes the decission hard and all this longing is tearing at my heart. Expressions, are the most important aspects, they create impressions |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
well done... i could sense the longing and the pain of it and the confusion of a sticky situation... thanks for the read (your pen name is appropriate to this poem... for whatever we do, there is a fee) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I could relate too..and doreen? thanks. That bit about the "fee" hit me like a bucket of cold water...lol.... But Fee? you expressed this beautifully...good luck to you, m'friend! |
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Fee Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 381Melbourne, Australia |
Thanks, one of my quotes is, "every action has a reaction." My sistuation is one that I am sure many have faced. Thanks for the loving words. Fee (I was born free, but now am very expensive :-) ) Expressions, are the most important aspects, they create impressions |
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