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Kiss the Sky
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Kiss the Sky |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
I belong to you You belong to me We are all alone Where sky touches sea, Where fate greets us, And that is all we need I take your hand You take my heart We are all there is While playing the part, While together in time, And time getting short I breathe you in as you are You smile in pure delight We are held by common truths With a whisper, a caressing sigh, With these things I belong to you, And you are like kissing the sky |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
PoeticKnight, Love this. Beautiful write. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
We are all there is While playing the part, While together in time, And time getting short I breathe you in as you are You smile in pure delight We are held by common truths With a whisper, a caressing sigh, With these things I belong to you, And you are like kissing the sky ===================== captivating in is sensual subtleties ... enchanting in its poetic mixture of imagery and emotions. that last line is such a cool comparison/metaphor that whole last verse is pure poetry in motion beautiful, romantic, writing PK Heaven bound on wings of love, there's so much that you can rise above. I surrender heart and soul, sacrificed to a higher goal. ~DepechMode~ |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Thank you Poeminister. And JM, thank you very much. I was very inspired when I wrote this one, its actually an older one I'm reposting. Thank you for making me look at it in a whole other light. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
May I quietly ditto Ms. Marie....who hit the nail on the head? |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
yes, you may....shhhhhh....*L* Thanks. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
sweet, and romantic...a soft and sensual verse, PK! |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
simply beautiful.... May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat... |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Lovely  ~Maria~ |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Very soft and romantic.............I like this a lot!  SEA |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
lovely piece. Charisma |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
This is so softly romantic...and just perfect for this time of year |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
This is so incredibly beautiful! I too have a dream of love by the sea! ah, well, time to do the wash! Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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