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ATelamon
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0 posted 2001-02-08 12:10 PM


Goddess she divine
  Over and above Heaven
    Dreams of mere mortals
      Deities pantheons part as
        Emerging in light she glows
          Silhouetted 'gainst every sky
            Stars pale before her life in light



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Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-02-08 12:11 PM


Well done!
Poeminister
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2 posted 2001-02-08 12:13 PM


Sublime descriptions in this.  You do acrostic wonderfully.  Enjoyed.

Poeminister

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And let the face of God shine through."
~Millay

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3 posted 2001-02-08 04:53 PM


You are a success at acrostics Sir

K

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4 posted 2001-02-08 09:11 PM


bump
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5 posted 2001-02-08 09:15 PM


Well done indeed - and nicely presented..
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