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Runny Pancakes |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
You surprised me with coffee in the early morning smiling at me in my sleep tossled disarray Your kiss landing somewhere upon my brow as you took the baby from my arms and entered my world blending in as easily as the butter melting across the pancakes I made you that you still ate even when you know I can't cook pancakes and I still think they were runny inside Now that........ That must be love! To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
WONDERFUL! I love the honesty of this...I can see this happening. I think this is an example of true love in action.  |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
ah, how true, I love the comparison here, this is a delight. |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Thank you so much, Poet DeVine and Rosebud! It was actually a little funny.  To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
He he yep that's love and all those silly little loveable things that go with it make it even more enjoyable....ethome Reality seldom bears the possibilities of imagination! |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
This is so sweet , what a love this must be keep it forever , runny pancakes and all wonderful emotion Julie |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
very well expressed, love the touches of humor and the honesty |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Indeed... What a great feeling this brings tot hose who have shared it. Well done. Michael |
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