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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2001-02-08 08:56 AM


Faces and Places

Words and Laughter cross the room
Accenting the dialogue.
Digressed in an easy way
Just like gossip of the day.

Eyes following each in turn
In mobile fluidly.
Empathize to slightly sly
In self imply and deny.

Changing places in cases
Reacting to stimulus
Miming each and every line
Shining each and every shine.

Every muscle will grimace
To a slightly different face
Prudence cannot stop facade
Nor will it bow to self-guard

Didn’t you know you interlace?
And wear your heart upon your face.


© Copyright 2001 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-02-08 09:29 AM


this is liking me so very, very much...and causing certain facial features, to be sure!
{~,^}

Janet Marie
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2 posted 2001-02-08 09:39 AM


Empathize to slightly sly
In self imply and deny.

Changing places in cases
Reacting to stimulus
Miming each and every line
Shining each and every shine.

Prudence cannot stop facade
Nor will it bow to self-guard

Didn’t you know you interlace?
And wear your heart upon your face.
===========================

and me do so loves the way you interlace  
and ya aint half bad when ya shine the shine either *S*
*winkiewinkie* way cool Stinkie




Tomorrow holds only mystery
And who's to say what might be
But in you I've found a love so strong
The sun and the moon look on in jealousy
~VH~

lucky
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3 posted 2001-02-08 10:24 AM


I have to say this makes a lot of sense to me lately as I've been in and out of hospitals and all... They give you some stuff and as you start to go under and fall and as you do they tell you your doctor's not there and somebody's taking his place... You want to say something but it's not the right time and your drifting into another space... Nice Seymour, maybe a bit to real.

My best, dale
.

Sunshine
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4 posted 2001-02-08 02:51 PM


Now that I read Dale's reply....of course my thoughts take a totally different view...

what can I say, Sy? But that you reach across vast avenues and touch us all where we live most....

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2001-02-08 10:34 PM


Sunshine,
Always enjoy your coments. *L*

JM,
I loves dat place dat interlace. WW S

Lucky,
Not so lucky, but I hope you are well now. Bless you and keep you and thank you for the read and comment.

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6 posted 2001-02-13 11:03 AM


If a person's true personality always shines through, what we see in you is pure gold. *S* (But I wear my heart on my SLEEVE! LOL) Great job, Seymour!
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