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Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05
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0 posted 2001-02-07 10:50 PM


I need you,
Though it's not often said,
I need you,
Like the warmth of the sun,
I need you,
Like the dawn of a new day,
I need you,
Like the perfect love song,
I need you,
Like the air I breath,
I need you,
Like the water that I drink,
I need you,
Sometimes I don't act like it,
But I need you.

© Copyright 2001 Rose - All Rights Reserved
Celeste
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1 posted 2001-02-07 11:09 PM


Brings tears to my eyes.   Wonderful simple honesty.   Thank you so much for sharing this.  I've saved it.  

To capture and live a moment is truly living


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2 posted 2001-02-07 11:37 PM


and sometimes, within that need, we forget to express it........thinking that they know........it's always good to let them know.........I liked this very much   -SEA
Rosebud1229
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3 posted 2001-02-08 11:12 AM


though not often said there is a need in all of us, and this one goes to my better half. My husband of almost 21 years, hard to believe but time flies by.
Daniel J D
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Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia
4 posted 2001-02-08 06:38 PM


Rosebud,
How very sweet and in sync as you said. He is a mighty lucky man. You are a real gem.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Rosebud1229
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5 posted 2001-02-09 02:37 PM


Daniel thank you, though the real gems are jewels that are here in passions poetry, They open my heart and make me realize, so so many things in writing and in reading.
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