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Open Poetry #12

I'm sick with boredom...

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 2001-02-07 10:26 PM

I’m sick with boredom.
A lonesome phantom,
I’m missing Autumn
with every atom.
By every photo
I’m made disheartened.
Her hair – so auburn!
Her heart – so ardent!

As thought some potion
gave me new passion,
with strange emotion,
I had a crush then.
I loved the notion
that we were rushing,--
each movement -- cautious!
Her cheeks were blushing!

She was my lover,
but now it’s over.
With her, I hovered,--
I’m sinking lower.
I loathe love often,--
more with each hour.
Her eyes then softened,--
now, they devour!

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serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2001-02-07 10:31 PM

I loved this...and? I am sick with boredom too...and? I can be ready in five minutes.

Truly tho, you suit my mood, and as always, love yer writing!

Celeste
Senior Member

since 2000-11-11

Posts 597

2 posted 2001-02-07 11:11 PM

wonderful flow to this! You have a very individual style. Truly enjoyed.

To capture and live a moment is truly living

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

3 posted 2001-02-08 06:37 AM

Thank you, glad you liked it!

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-02-12 08:39 PM

you have no idea how I relate to this one!!

So, what do you say we hit the town???

Great writing. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

5 posted 2001-02-12 08:42 PM

Boredom never writes like this at my house!! Good poem sir.

Meadowmuse
Member Elite

since 1999-12-27

Posts 3263

6 posted 2001-02-12 08:45 PM

Your work so often has a strong sense of music, this is certainly no exception. Plaintive and potent, Master. Thank you for it.

Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

7 posted 2001-02-13 03:19 AM

Brilliant writing, Master!

Nathan

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