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Celeste
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0 posted 2001-02-07 06:37 PM


I remember
your voice
as bitter as december wind
icy cold and
void of emotion
whipping through me as
my heart drops to the floor

Of the many sides of you
this will always be the one
that scares me most


To capture and live a moment is truly living


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Sven
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1 posted 2001-02-07 06:46 PM


very cold indeed. . . it's always scary when we see a side of someone that surprises us. . .

well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Celeste
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2 posted 2001-02-07 06:52 PM


Very true.  Thank you, Sven.  You know I always try to save everyone from seeing me in my Psychotic Mental State.   *grins!*



To capture and live a moment is truly living


kcsgrandma
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3 posted 2001-02-08 01:29 AM


Psychotic? I don't think so.  Voices can send a lot of messages that having nothing to do with the words they speak.  Well done.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

kitkat
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4 posted 2001-02-08 06:26 AM


It is always a shock to our hearts when the sound of ones voice, especially the one you Love, is so cold. Nicely written.
Celeste
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5 posted 2001-02-08 07:31 AM


kcsgrandma - Thank you!  I was actually talking about pms in my comment to Sven.   I swear I'm only psychotic 3 days a month.  The rest of the month I'm completely sane.     LOL!

kitkat - Thank you!

To capture and live a moment is truly living


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