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An Invatatioon to Fly
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An Invatatioon to Fly |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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An Invitation to Fly She holds me in her power…like the essence of a flower Sending sight to wildest flight…Pirouetting in the light. Makes me feel soul full feelings…Lovely and most appealing. Sends the smell of rose filled air…Makes me weave in drunken dare. How I wish to hold her hand…dance with her in fairy land Come within a common age…forget about the outrage. Fraternize a fantasy…walk the path of empathy. Hold her in my arms and space…Wrap her round a shawl of lace. Bring her to the stars with me…show her things I would she see. Walk her through my greenery…to my world of scenery. Make her taste my sense of while…sense and wile that is my style. Please her to the nth degree…spread her wings to fly with me. Fly with me to shangri-la…in our minds it is not far I’ve blend a magic potion…it waits your very notion Bring nothing but fantasy…and leave the rest up to me. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
She will love this.... I know I do... |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
WOW, now this is an invitation that a lot of ladys would like to get! Me included. Very good and I hope you get the "right" lady to answer. Hugs, ME |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Who could turn down an invitation like that  ~ Ruth www.angelfire.com/pa/OriginalMinds/index.html |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
i am with hoot on this one...sigh...now I shall go check my mail....they say the invitation is in the mail? right?....lol...well a lady can dream can't she? great work! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I accept sir...just let me brush off these dusty wings |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
A sweet invitation you've penned. Enjoyed the read. Poeminister "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." -Plato |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Hold her in my arms and space…Wrap her round a shawl of lace. Bring her to the stars with me…show her things I would she see. Walk her through my greenery…to my world of scenery. Make her taste my sense of while…sense and wile that is my style. Please her to the nth degree…spread her wings to fly with me. Fly with me to shangri-la…in our minds it is not far I’ve blend a magic potion…it waits your very notion Bring nothing but fantasy…and leave the rest up to me. ========================== have you ever heard a butterfly sigh? you have now ... for this is a *sigh* ... on high. *winkiewinkie* and ya know what the real gift of this poem is ... you realizing you do indeed fly ... and so do all who read your words. Your poets pen gave you your wings a long time ago ... let us be the wind beneath them  TYSSWW ... HBBLY  Tomorrow holds only mystery And who's to say what might be But in you I've found a love so strong The sun and the moon look on in jealousy ~VH~ [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 02-07-2001).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I hope she brings a tractor trailor load of fantasy for you Seymour I'd like to see you have that much fun just dealing with it...this is another well written piece from you, I enjoyed very very much! ethome Reality seldom bears the possibilities of imagination! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Fly with me to Shangri-la......in our minds it is not far well such a lovely invitation.....I would love to fly with you to Shangri-la excellent write as usual ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
To all the wonderful people above and you know who you are I send my love and my blessings. We will leave at the first light of the full moon. And it will be informal dress just birthday suits and a bag of fantasy. LOL Sy |
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