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Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada

0 posted 2001-02-07 11:32 AM


Loves' Power

It flowed into me
making my blood sing
melting me inside
as my heart took wing

It warmed my cold flesh
lighting desire
sending heat rushing
setting love's fire

It was so gentle
filled with feeling
its touch so tender
my senses realing

It told me so much
I could feel the heat
deep and caressing
my heart missed a beat

Sighing I listened
not missing a word
showing loves' power
as your voice I heard

I opened my eyes
was it just a dream
still a fantasy
created for me

Karen Torbiak 2001©




Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams.
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ATelamon
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since 2001-02-06
Posts 328
Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up
1 posted 2001-02-07 11:45 AM


Another step along the path to corporeal reality- the dream. Pinch me not say I.

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
2 posted 2001-02-07 04:03 PM


Long time no read, Karen....this was lovely!

Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada
3 posted 2001-02-07 04:25 PM


Startime
Love's Power indeed.  Wonderfully penned.  

Poeminister

"...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls-
O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love."
-Poe


kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME
4 posted 2001-02-08 01:24 AM


Ah! Those dreams can seem so real! This is lovely.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

Cerenity
Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
5 posted 2001-02-09 05:51 PM


Hi Startime,

You keep on dreaming cause this was great, so very much enjoyed, thank you.

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



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