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Open Poetry #12

hair in my alphabet soup

monique
Member

since 2000-02-03

Posts 369
Louisiana

0 posted 2001-02-12 07:49 PM

i hear you are here all year
around the corner drinking beer
talking words falling to the rear

Who am i
To tell you hi
Without saying goodbye

If I choose to write a prose
Would you still pose
As we kiss the rose

I saw no lemon
In you brown eye chiffon
Teaching me a lesson

I must be out of my mind
To suck life behind
Your grind

Now what is so bouncy
And cannot use mercy
To see you so fancy

I am in my house
Looking at your mouse
About to pounce

Manner me not my dysfunction
Helping you was a pleasure
It might not have been the the will of God
She talking about me
Was up on more mountains that i could climb

Judgements with an s
I don't know if i can handle all of those

In sin we did the wild thing
And it had to come to an end

monique

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

1 posted 2001-02-13 07:01 AM

Your final couplet pretty much says it all,monique...

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

2 posted 2001-02-14 10:10 AM

Hi Monique,

Soup for the soul, last two lines do sum it up well, enjoyed the read, thank you.

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

monique
Member

since 2000-02-03

Posts 369
Louisiana

3 posted 2001-02-15 04:20 AM

bonjour dear people
i should have called it confession
but i feel so much like a hair in a soup
the way i come on to passion
i cannot write as much poetry as you all do
but when it comes it feels good
very good

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