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kcsgrandma
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Presque Isle, ME

0 posted 2001-02-07 01:42 AM


Northern Light

I read your e-mail.
Aurora borealis
Reflected my smile.

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Blazing Blizzard

Snow and cold outside
Glowing fire in my heart
Because you are there.



© Copyright 2001 Marilyn Gordon - All Rights Reserved
kitkat
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since 2000-01-11
Posts 878
Nova Scotia
1 posted 2001-02-07 05:38 AM


I enjoyed reading these. nicely done :-)

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You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face
and show the world all the love in your heart
Then people are gonna treat

Mother_Earth
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since 2000-11-20
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1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan
2 posted 2001-02-07 11:51 AM


How very nice! Both are gems.  Hugs, ME
Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

3 posted 2001-02-07 03:42 PM


this one really shone,  

"I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis



jellybeans
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since 2000-10-13
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4 posted 2001-02-07 03:48 PM


like these, so much feeling in such short verse
Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26
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Regina SK; Canada
5 posted 2001-02-07 03:51 PM


Lovely haiku.  Nicely done.

Poeminister

"...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls-
O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love."
-Poe


laryalee
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6 posted 2001-02-07 08:29 PM


Marilyn, you can put so much meaning into such a short space....subtlety and clarity combined!
Lary

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7 posted 2001-02-07 08:44 PM


I love the images that you use here. . .

wonderful. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

kcsgrandma
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since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522
Presque Isle, ME
8 posted 2001-02-08 01:02 AM


kitkat - Thank you.     I couldn't help writing such a big smile.

Mother Earth - Thank you. Hugs back.

Kathleen - Thanks.   I like your choice of words.

jellybeans - That's the fun thing about these Japanese forms, trying to say a lot with a little.  Thank you.

Poeminster - Thank you.

Lary -   Not only are you a master poet, but a wonderful responder as well!  Thank you.

Sven - Thanks to a fellow northerner.   We write what we know.


To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

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