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ATelamon
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0 posted 2001-02-07 12:34 PM


The storm
  inspires
    reason
      encircling emotives
        denying dreams

Eden simply must
  yet sing not itself
    ever teaching the
      soul song higher reaching



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Nan
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1 posted 2001-02-07 07:40 AM


I'm still reading this for its multi-faceted connotations... I'm looking forward to reading more from you - Keep 'em coming..

Waft every crest upon your destined sea.
Embrace the Wave of Serendipity,
Lest its elusive arcane ecstasy
Refurl with sail for all eternity.

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2 posted 2001-02-10 08:09 AM


*wow* what a wonderful expression.....enjoyed it very much

Charisma

ATelamon
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3 posted 2001-02-10 08:30 AM


Thank you both for your kind words of encouragement. And of course for taking time to read.

Thanks again.
AT

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4 posted 2001-03-12 01:19 AM


AT, this is fantastic and I'll be keeping my eyes open for more of these jewels from you...
Thank you for the enjoyed read...
~coco~

ATelamon
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5 posted 2001-03-12 01:58 AM


Thank you. For some reason the muse demanded acrostic for near my first two dozen posts.

Glad you enjoyed, they are a different sort of challenge.

" I can lie to my mirror only so long as it chooses to listen to me, and look me in the eye."

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6 posted 2001-03-12 12:07 PM


"the soul song higher reaching" ~ nicely done. I have yet to write an acrostic, but believe I may consider one, thanks to reading yours. It seems to be a fun, yet interesting, form. Thanks for this one.

Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau


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