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aurora rain
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since 2000-11-15

Posts 90

0 posted 2001-02-06 10:19 PM

there’s tomorrow at the brim of her yellow hat with its paper wings
neon-hearted and warm against windows with their eyes shut and i
do not have time today, no sir, for your irreverence, for your charm
and i do not have time for your letter and your wooden chair upright
with its hands beckoning to open, to push the metal through its wiry
veins until the ink bled through the paper onto the skin and all hurt
came anew rushing like a spill over a lace tablecloth and i tore it
where its holes had not yet begun and i came undone as the stitches
tore one by one, the thread unraveling as the yellow hat blew from her
head like a photograph out of sight from summer, your evening dream
with its candles and pandora’s box kept intact and the porcelain pale
and her string of pearls wrapped sideways around the envelope.

and still i cannot help but hear the symphonies through walls
with their crescendos and staccatos diving backwards into
their charm of evening, their fluid notes hung on sky like
angels on parade. and if you are my angel on parade i do
not know if i can keep you from descending, i do not know
the use of these ornamental tones and if your heart should
wish it were not so and your eyes were to sing goodbye,
i think i could hear it, music from another room, hips swaying
and bells cascading and the parlor filling its sides up with
the madness of a crowd.
and if i could be there.

OLIAS
Senior Member

since 2000-06-20

Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa

1 posted 2001-02-06 10:43 PM

Ohhh I like this, a myriad of images, feelings, sights, sounds and thoughts, disjointed but somehow whole, wonderful piece.

Regards,
Olias

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2001-02-06 10:47 PM

This....is very intense. I hope you are ok...., and now I need a breather....wow

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

3 posted 2001-02-06 10:52 PM

~What a release! This read quickly to me (which helped to push the feeling) and left something behind in me indeed. This write carries weight. *whew* Well done. *Peace.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2001-02-11 09:14 PM

AuroraRain~
I'm not sure if I understand the all of this -
but I know that I like it.

And this -

'and if you are my angel on parade i do
not know if i can keep you from descending'

just sings to me.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

5 posted 2001-02-11 11:19 PM

Well...I liked it, not quite sure why but I did. I prescribe...Ritalin. Just kidding.

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