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Etched Upon The Bark
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Etched Upon The Bark |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Their lives were pinned with hopes and dreams. Fifty years together they have seen. On each other they could always depend. So much strength in that golden band. A love that blossomed years ago, Today, still continues to grow. A promise of forever Two hearts were linked together. Years have passed and you still can see The letters left there on the tree. Two names carved within a heart Etched with love upon the bark. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so very lovely, Eloise! So sweet! |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
A wonderful image of true love's enduring power. Very nice poem, Eloise! Trev. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is very pretty....too sad that so many marriages can't survive .... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I absolutely love the simplicity of this!!! "I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eloise~ It is so GOOD to see you ! !  This is just a beautiful piece of poetry. I sure enjoyed the nostalgic memories it stirred in my heart. Thanking you for that. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Denise, Trew, Kathleen, Sunshine and Marge, thank you all so much for coming by, reading and commenting. I wrote this for my parents who have been together for 54 years. And thanks Marge it is good to be back. It has been awhile.  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Needs another go 'round ! ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
I missed this the first time, so thanks to Marge for bumping it. My parents have been together for 56 years, and this description of enduring love made me think of them and smile. Thanks for sharing it. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is wonderful!!! And it's great to know they're still firmly etched on each other's hearts. *S* |
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