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A Violet-Tinged Nightfall
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A Violet-Tinged Nightfall |
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Sunlit Soul Junior Member
since 2001-02-05
Posts 37Never Land |
The violet luster of folding sky Carries darkness to cover The remaining breath of day-- A foaming, iridescent trail Of light Holding feeble sprays From the sun’s glimmering gold. ...The moments slowly exhale.... Dusk quiets as fluid midnight (almost like a chiffon gown) Slips over the lonely sky, The occasional star-twinkle The only disturbance Of the rich navy heavens. Lady Luna- drenched in Silvery white sheen- Is the silent guardian Of the verdant, sleeping Earth... Watching with her pearled eyes ‘Till morning gently inhales And the world awakens once more. "Every man dies. Not every man lives." -Tim Robbins |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hello Friend Sun....so glad to see yet another name that shares the bright of life! Welcome to Passions! Sit back, enjoy, read, comment, post your poetry...if you have any questions, contact a moderator! And check your e-mail for a special message! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
ahhhhhhhh. . . this is wonderful. . . nothing like it. . . excellent my friend. . . and welcome!!  ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Beautiful imagery and feeling, an excellent piece, thanks for posting and welcome. Regards, Olias |
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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
This is a breath of fresh air - an exquisite glimpse of nature's beauty... excellent images! Lary |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SunLitSoul~ Just lovely ... welcome to the posting side of Passions ! Such vivid imagery is contained in your piece. Thank you for sharing. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Absolutely like a gentle summer breeze across one's cheek and shoulders. Lovely. |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Wonderful, very nice imagery , painted the perfect picture , welcome Julie |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Welcome! I liked this one and hope to see more of your work! " I have seen without perceiving I have been another man Let me pierce the realm of glamour So I know just what I am"....Dweller on the Threshold, |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Welcome to passions.....with such a wonderful entrance.....liked it a lot. wonderful done Charisma |
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ATelamon Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 328Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up |
Exhale the woes of the day indeed replace with night's stillness as if a dream ascending nicely said |
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Sunlit Soul Junior Member
since 2001-02-05
Posts 37Never Land |
Thank you all for the gracious welcome. You have all brought a smile to this sunlit face!  "Every man dies. Not every man lives." -Tim Robbins |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Lady Luna- drenched in Silvery white sheen- Is the silent guardian Of the verdant, sleeping Earth... Watching with her pearled eyes ‘Till morning gently inhales And the world awakens once more. ================= the imagery in this is stunning .... beautiful writing ... Welcome to Passion Sunlit Soul.. nice to have you here... I look forward to more of your lovely work take care jm Heaven bound on wings of love, there's so much that you can rise above. I surrender heart and soul, sacrificed to a higher goal. ~DepechMode~ |
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