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Temptress
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0 posted 2001-02-06 07:39 PM


So definetely the night's raspy winter wind circulates,
Entering within reasonable motions of gentle beastly glides.
Entering here are the ones who seek both sides of the hour,
And realize too late that the moments here,
Suspend themselves in enrapturing evaporations,
Crossing over themselves and restarting at the finish line.


"This above all-ask yourself in the stillest hour of your night:MUST I write? Delve into yourself for a deep answer.

Rainer Maria Rilke
from "Le

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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2001-02-06 08:45 PM


yes....I enjoyed...restarting at the finish line...perfect.

" Only those who risk going too far can possibly find out how far one can go."
T.S. Eliot


athena4
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2 posted 2001-02-06 08:53 PM


Temptress,
   Wonderful essence of nighttime imagery.
Liked this very much...
           Elise

Robert Joseph
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3 posted 2001-02-06 09:36 PM



A bit of wispy, and twisting midnight flying...Very much enjoyed!

Robert Joseph

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4 posted 2001-02-06 10:29 PM


ah yes. . . to start at the end. . . if we only could. . .

excellent. . .  

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Temptress
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5 posted 2001-02-06 10:31 PM


Thank you for all of your kind words!  
I just whipped this one up, and left it here because it seemed to want to be free and read.

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