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Celeste
Senior Member

since 2000-11-11

Posts 597

0 posted 2001-02-06 06:49 PM

In my dreams reflections, I always shall find you
And even though you're gone, I still wish somehow you knew

that I broke through those chains time rusted tightly by my fear
And I am now the woman that you always saw so clear

I'm still within the journey but I'm feeling really strong
I only hope you hear my whispered thanks for loving me so long

To capture and live a moment is truly living

OLIAS
Senior Member

since 2000-06-20

Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa

1 posted 2001-02-06 07:04 PM

Very thought provoking in so few lines, if we could only have the belief in ourselves that others have, wonderful poem.

Take Care,
Olias

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-02-06 10:43 PM

Olias hit the nail on the head dreamkeeper. . . and I believe that you now have found that belief. . .

wonderful. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

jellybeans
Member Elite

since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

3 posted 2001-02-07 09:51 AM

wow, this gave me shivers....someday I hope to recite these very words ......wow

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2001-02-07 04:01 PM

This....is wonderful....and very strong!

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

5 posted 2001-02-12 04:56 PM

Wow!! This one hit home... ya gotta hope they know. *S* Well done!

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

6 posted 2001-02-12 05:08 PM

Lucky that you found you strong self. Sometimes we don't see our potential until we are push to it. Great poem!

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

7 posted 2001-02-12 05:16 PM

Thought provoking work.

I like it.

laryalee
Member

since 2000-06-19

Posts 352
Alberta, Canada

8 posted 2001-02-12 05:29 PM

This brought tears - it is so beautiful - I imagine it will relate to someone special for each reader - I know who it is for me...
I will cherish this one, Dreamkeeper!
Bless you and thank you...
Lary

Celeste
Senior Member

since 2000-11-11

Posts 597

9 posted 2001-02-12 05:30 PM

Thanks so much everyone! I appriciate you taking the time to read and comment.

To capture and live a moment is truly living

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