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0 posted 2001-02-06 03:22 PM



With scissors made for little hands,
And wintergreen smelling paste,
Construction paper and doilies,
And a pencil so he could erase;
He was ready for this important task,
And he knew what he wanted to do,
He'd work till he got it perfect,
This gift, for you know who.
Sitting there in his flannel shirt,
And after a few false starts,
He took those tiny scissors,
And made some perfect hearts.
Those little hands grabbed a doily,
Then dove into the jar of paste,
And with a tiny finger,
He stuck each heart in place.
Lastly he took the pencil,
And printed his words with care,
A couple of letters backwards,
And a kiss he'd drawn on there;
He shyly came and sat on my lap,
And gave me this valentine,
Which simply read "I Love You,"
"Mom, will you be mine?"
And with tears shining in my eyes,
My heartstrings felt the tug,
From the words of my little buddy,
I read a five year olds hug.


© Copyright 2001 Bonnie Church - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-02-06 04:10 PM


LOVING THIS....

SO VERY MUCH...

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2 posted 2001-02-06 04:14 PM


this is so sweet.......love it....helen
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3 posted 2001-02-06 10:19 PM


Bonnie this brought smiles. How warm and wonderful a picture you paint, just vivid.

Those are just the sweetest valentines aren't they? awwww

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4 posted 2001-02-06 10:44 PM


Oh Bonnie - it takes me back - way back, and those Valentines are in my suitcases of memories....so very precious.  Thank you for this gem - so lovingly written and shared!
Lary

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5 posted 2001-02-07 10:17 PM


Bonnie~
You sent me to the cedar chest with this one !

That 'famous' card from my six year old son -

'Mommy, I love you ....
more than - Sabrina !'
from Steven


*LOL !  Sabrina was the neighbor's DOG !
Now THAT was some kinda love ! !

Thank you for this little jeweled hug !
Delightful to this mommy's heart !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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6 posted 2001-02-07 10:21 PM



Oh, this is just so sweet! I'm not a mom yet, but I just love this, I think I'll share it with my mom  

Take care,
Melissa~

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7 posted 2001-02-07 11:41 PM


Bonnie--this is precious...treasure the time and save it.
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8 posted 2001-02-08 12:48 PM


This is soooooo sweet, Bonnie!!!  
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