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John Yaws
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 860
Texas

0 posted 2001-02-06 03:19 PM


A Place of My Own

For long years I dreamed that-
I’d have me a place of my own.
A few head of cattle-
A cabin that I could call home.

While working long hours,from “can see, to cain’t”,
My dreams helped me get through the day-
It’s hard to save money for building a spread-
On “a hundred a week” rider’s pay.

So one day I entered the saddle bronc riding-
At a nearby, small-town rodeo...
I won first money, ambition was kindled-
So on to the next did I go.

Soon I was winnin’, some said God was blessin’
I think that Old Nick had a hand-
Gone was the peace of mind, ranch work had give me...
I now was a rodeo man.

Drivin’ long hours, hard falls, and the bruises-
Big money was coming my way...
Girls by the dozens, to polish our buckles...
Forgotten the very next day.

Drinking was common, and pills for the drive-
Are all things that lead to a fall.
My talent fell victim to years of loose livin’-
And hearin’ the rodeo’s call.

So, what am I saying, to all who will listen?
It’s quit while you can, and go home-
Fame is so fleeting, the cost so misleading...
So stay where you are, don’t you roam.

I guess I succeeded, I got what I asked for-
A place that I really belong-
Out back of the feedlot, a shed for hay storage,
And in it.... a bed of my own.

© Copyright 2001 John R. Yaws - All Rights Reserved
Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136
Mobile, AL
1 posted 2001-02-06 06:53 PM


What a wonderful poem of a lesson learned. I'm taking this back to page one!  

Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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2 posted 2001-02-06 06:54 PM


Wise words, John! Skillfully expressed! So great to see you here again!!

[This message has been edited by Denise (edited 02-06-2001).]

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
3 posted 2001-02-06 10:09 PM


WE live and we learn. And then we hope others learn from our mistakes.

Great writing!

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