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“One or the Other”
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“One or the Other” |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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The body for one…for the other, the heart… No space in between…while a lifetime apart… A love old with time…while new as the dawn… To one give the verse…to the other the song… One takes his due…while the other gives back… With eyes closed in passion…blend wishing with fact… One needs the body…the other the soul… With one it is half…with the other, it’s whole… Craving the one…while the other looks on… Wanting to touch…But to feel would be wrong… One knows each pain…and the other does not… Takes for the gain…and gives for the thought… It’s perfectly clear…the facts become truth… Decisions like this…better made by the youth… Make love with one…or love like a Brother… So, which is the one?…and which one’s the other? ~~~ enjoy yourself ~~~ it's later than you think! |
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ATelamon Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 328Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up |
Questions worth pondering all gift of personal theme to the drama Universal touching All [This message has been edited by ATelamon (edited 02-06-2001).] |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Which one....I've had trouble differntiating myself... |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
ATelamon... Thank you for reading, and welcome to Passions!! You'll like it here!!  Elizabeth... Sometimes it's just too hard to seperate one from the other!! Thank you!! ~~~ enjoy yourself ~~~ it's later than you think! [This message has been edited by Sunnyone (edited 02-06-2001).] |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Wow Sunnyone, this is seems so heartfelt, such tough, tough questions....and, I love it! Bonnie |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well this doesn't leave room for wiggling, now does it? LOL...good one Sis! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
wonderful thoughts....enjoyed the read a lot excellent write ((hugs)) Charisma |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sunny, you just have to be two of you  I like this a lot, it's a tough question . You wrote it well. Sandra Dream as if you'll live forever; Live as if you'll die today. — James Dean |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
HHHHmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.......I am sticking with loving you like a brother.......that seems to have too many rewards to give up. Wonderful write my sister of poetry. Nice to see you shining in the illumination of your poetry so brilliantly. If you find yourself stranded in a storm ...then reach for my hand and we will play in the puddles together |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Thank you for speaking to my spirit, my soul. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Thank you for speaking to my spirit, my soul. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Lovely write. Enjoyed this muchly. Poeminister |
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