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Marsha
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0 posted 2001-02-06 09:30 AM



I Will Feel Loves' Smile


I will feel loves smile again
I wasn’t meant to have pain
Our lives should be so good
Beauty to touch if we would
Hearts don’t break at all
They stumble and they fall

But they don’t really break
That is a common mistake
They have a bruise that’s all
This teaches us heart’s rule
To learn our lessons so well
Pause before your oceans’ swell

I will wander under loves’ sun
My hearts life has barely begun
Its journey through this its time
I’ve not committed loves crime
All I’ve done is give too much
Been there to offer my touch

And I’ll sail through this sea
Even while the storm scares me
I am living my destiny my fate
I’ll not wait forever at too late
That is a path that has no light
A path that leads to pains sight

I will hear my name called out
In ecstasy my heart will shout
I’ll lie again in loves safe arms
Warm and away from all harms
First I must cross my pains plain
Before I can reach my soul again

I’ll climb out if this vale of tears
I’ll repel the demons of my fears
Stand erect and strong and smile
Rid myself of the pain and bile
For I will feel love’s smile again
Love will cleanse me in her flame


Marsha




Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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1slick_lady
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1 posted 2001-02-06 12:01 PM


I'll not wait forever at too late

        I love this line......the hope of love.... yet again.....helen

Sven
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2 posted 2001-02-06 12:39 PM


indeed you will love. . .  

why look there. . .  

wonderful poem. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Robert Joseph
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3 posted 2001-02-06 05:36 PM


Love will cleanse me in her flame


Marsha, I feel as if I've climbed a set of stairs, and reaching the summit, I've found the treasure. Lovely work!

Robert Joseph



Celeste
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4 posted 2001-02-06 06:21 PM


Beautiful!!!!!!!

"Pause before your oceans' swell"  I love that line.  

I'm saving this, is so full of honesty and hope, I think I'm going to need to read it several times.......

Thank you for posting!

To capture and live a moment is truly living


jonmcm
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5 posted 2001-02-06 06:51 PM


Marsha, a wonderful poem.

'For I will feel love’s smile again
Love will cleanse me in her flame'

Jon  

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