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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2001-02-06 09:11 AM


Wherever You Are, My Love…
By: Noah Eaton
2/4/01

Wherever you are, my love
I just want to say
That I think of you all the time
And I dream of you every day

Every time I look up at the stars
I remember looking into your gorgeous eyes in my dreams
Tears of Jupiter fall from your eyes, twinkling in the starlight
As I dance with you on the rings of Saturn, twin-tailed comet rain buzzing like honeybees

Every time I smell a rose
Your breathtaking beauty comes to mind
The magic of your love is more beautiful than the most luscious rose of all
The sweetness of spring blooms in you, every breath and sigh you make is a burst of sunshine in my life

Every time I lick a piece of candy
The sweetness of your smile shimmers in my head, tingling enchantingly
I remember kissing your sugary lips, the taste of your mouth is the sweetest thing of all
Soft lips sighing in velvet touches of true lovers blessing

Every time I step outside into the beauty of nature and listen to the birds sing
I swear I can hear your golden hearts words echo upon the mountainside
Your heart sings loves words with a voice sweeter than a flock of sparrows and robins
Your loves melody makes my dream come true, two lovebirds singing together in the heavenly tree of life

Wherever you are, my love
I just wanted to tell you how I love you so
And how much I am awaiting that day
When we fall into each others arms, loving each other so

Wherever you are, my love…I love you!



© Copyright 2001 Nadia Lockheart - All Rights Reserved
emily
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1 posted 2001-02-06 11:37 AM


ahhhhhh how romantic!!
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2 posted 2001-02-06 11:45 AM


enjoy the read
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3 posted 2001-02-06 12:34 PM


really nice I loveed it
Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2001-02-07 08:24 AM


Thank you Emily, Vandala, and Agent696_DS for your beautiful comments! Much appreciated them!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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5 posted 2001-02-10 08:15 AM


wherever you are....love you.

treat to read, and gives me a warm feeling.

((hugs))
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6 posted 2001-02-10 08:18 AM


To place in words the essence of the belief within, for all to see, refreshes any who allow themselves a moment to open, when they read.

Very nicely stated.
compliments
AT

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7 posted 2001-02-10 08:15 PM


Noah, I'm just amazed when I read something of yours. . . I love this one. . . the images that you bring out and the feelings of love and light just shine through like diamonds my friend. . .

Excellent. . .  

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