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One Thousand Grains of Me
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One Thousand Grains of Me |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I offer all I am to you But you dont want the whole of me I am pulled in a thousand ways Different voices desire different me's A thousand echoes chasing me A thousand needs to be fulfilled A thousand wants wanting me I cannot be a thousand me's A thousand hearts cannot give more Than this one, I offer you I want a thousand memories Not a thousand tears A thousand kisses soft and sweet To fill a thousand years Like a thousand grains of sand Scattered by the sea Come together on the shore So are a thousand me's One heart one mind a thousand dreams I offer this to you A thousand ways to love you When you only see just me with a thousand thank yous to Serenity for being the push I needed  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Paula.....was fun...you are a joy... THANK YOU...and? love the little Green Gemini thingies...  MANY HUGS LOVELY ONE! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Paula, I'm so sorry you had to be pushed into this write, I'm so glad you did it. Write on Romantic one Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I really like this one Paula...the title really caught my attention  ~ Ruth www.angelfire.com/pa/OriginalMinds/index.html |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Paula dear heart, ten thousand lives would not be long enough to tell you how great is this. I truly love this one dear heart, utterly utterly divine. Is this a wonderful write, yes it is. Of course you knew I'd love it, and that is because it is guarenteed to be wonderful. Thanks for this beauty dear heart Take care love as always Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very nice, Paula, I understand this feeling, and you spelled it out perfectly. You always do. Sandra |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Serenity...you know as well as I that without you this one would never have been written...hugs to you...AND the lil green Gemini things LOL Kethry...lol...it was kinda like pulling teeth...but she did it...OOHHHHHHHHHH my aching head!!!!!!!! hoot_owl_rn...thank you Ruth...that was Serenitys' doing as well Marsha...LOL girl...you are just so good for the soul...love you Sandra...that is such a sweet thing to say...thank you |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
a gemini huh?? hehehehe to bad i am an archer. heh great poem hun. your poetry always fasenate me. i know i know i cant spell hehehe. great job hunlove ya jesse True beauty is often hidden in darkness... |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Excellent work Paula! " I have seen without perceiving I have been another man Let me pierce the realm of glamour So I know just what I am"....Dweller on the Threshold, |
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