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Waiting for Tranquillity
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Waiting for Tranquillity |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
 when there’s just no reaching the inconsolable heart, look to the dawn; don’t spend lifetimes looking for answers... turn your eyes to the sky-- there you will find hope abundant. when the present situation seems insurmountable, fix your gaze on the heavens... the wondrous splendor of the stars; the glistening comfort of the moon... let the cares of the day diminish with the setting of the sun. move with the flow of the gentle spring breeze... lose yourself in the serenity of this evening. you see...there’s solace in this night; in the sound of silence you’ll find release. let your heart go...it will find its way back to you; follow the way of the waves... fly free like seagulls over the water. sing aloud of your freedom, and morning will bring that quiet of heart you so desire. -kh 02/05/01 ...if I ride these dreams to the Irish Sea, oh, even there, I know your heart rides with me... |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
I blow a kiss to you, before I retreat to my bed.. sweet dreams Will you give me yourself? Will you come travel with me? Shall we stick by each other as long as we live? -Walt Whitman |
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Gothkitty Junior Member
since 2001-02-05
Posts 32Australia |
Very nice work  a touch of Jim morrisoon in there I love his work, this is wonderful like this very muchgk |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Snowpants. Lovely write. Beautiful and soothing Poeminister |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
EagleScorpion: why thank you, my fellow New Jerseyan! Have a great night!  gk: thank you so much! I am glad you liked it!! sp  ...if I ride these dreams to the Irish Sea, oh, even there, I know your heart rides with me... |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Hey Poeminister! You sneaked in there on me! Thank you so much! ...if I ride these dreams to the Irish Sea, oh, even there, I know your heart rides with me... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
well just work that imagery girlie-girl .. the "teach" will be pleased with this one  very lovely Sp ... and kissed with quiet comfort and serenity beautiful |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
sp...there arent words to tell you how this hit my heart so I will just say thank you |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SnowPants~ This is just absolutely BEAUTIFUL ! Oh, how serene are your thoughts painted so lovely across the night. Truly a delightful read. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
kris~ thank you SO much for posting this today! you have no idea how i needed to read something like this my dear friend. once again you have come through for me at a time when i needed you the most. you surely are an angel here on Earth...and all the love and warmth you shower on others, shall be rewarded. this is both inspirational and beautiful in presentation and message! awesome write... love ya my friend, amy "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart and can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
this is so peaceful & calming.....i enjoyed it so much.....helen |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
JM: yep...I'm a-tryin'! Yes, I do hope the 'teach' will be impressed...thank you so much!! Paula: you said it all in your reply...no need to thank me. it is my pleasure to share my heart with you all! thank you for your reply!! Marge: thank you so much! your compliment means a lot to me!! Glad you could stop by!! Aims: awww....there ya go again, makin' my head big!! but, i'm not complainin'!!  really, girlie, I truly appreciate your wonderful reply! thank you!!! Love ya, m'friend!! -e ~~~~Helen: thank you!! I am glad you liked it!! sp  ...if I ride these dreams to the Irish Sea, oh, even there, I know your heart rides with me... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Hey..........teacher is proud and issuing a "A+" for this one. Dang girl....you make a good student of imagery. Beautiful use of your lessons here and now let's see more. Maybe in a two line or alternating four line rhyme. You up to it? COOL....... Superb piece of poetry really my friend. Your growth is showing wonderfully. If you find yourself stranded in a storm ...then reach for my hand and we will play in the puddles together |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Boy, aren't we demanding...I'm just recovering from this one!  LOLOK, OK...you're on...eventually. hehe But, seriously...thank you, my friend for your wonderful replies and pointers. I truly appreciate it! sp ...if I ride these dreams to the Irish Sea, oh, even there, I know your heart rides with me... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very beautiful and I thank you for sending me here huggss... ~Wynter * am just a bit moody at this time.. "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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