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Honeybee
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0 posted 2001-02-05 10:29 PM



A dark poem from a dark heart...


Disease

Beat me,
degrade me,
do as you please,
I'm at your mercy,
I'm on my knees
~*~
Hate me,
cut me,
suck my worth to tease
crucify without nails
in cruelest degrees
~*~
Rape me,
taint me,
strip a heart to freeze,
warp the mind,
I share your disease

*By Melissa Honeybee*



© Copyright 2001 Melissa P. Long-Monette - All Rights Reserved
Sunlit Soul
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1 posted 2001-02-05 10:39 PM


What powerful and cutting words.  They hit deep within my soul.  I'm sending some light your way and I hope that whatever happens to be burdening you lets up quickly.  Life is much too short to let anything bother you for too long.  



"Every man dies. Not every man lives."
-Tim Robbins

whiskey
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2 posted 2001-02-05 10:43 PM


Im sorry for what ever is troubling you , I hope you find your peace soon, very powerful piece felt it to the core, keep your chin up


Julie

jwesley
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3 posted 2001-02-05 10:54 PM


Definitely conveyed the feelings, my friend. Did it well and good...thanks for sharing.

jwesley

Elizabeth
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4 posted 2001-02-06 12:07 PM


A dark poem indeed, Melissa....but not a dark heart. Hugs to ya.
Sven
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5 posted 2001-02-06 12:38 PM


indeed not a dark heart. . .

but a heart full of light. . .

powerful words my friend. . .

-------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Honeybee
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6 posted 2001-02-09 07:20 PM



Thank you Sunlit Soul, jwesley, Julie, Elizabeth and Sven for reading this dark poem, and for your support~

Take care,
Melissa~

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