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Secret flaw |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Secret flaw it flows through my hands no containment stains my fingers as it flows leaning down I taste it reeling back disbelief bitter sweet I rush to congeal it evaporating as it dries between it is my secret flaw chasing it pouring it everywhere dancing then disappearing streams through the fractured red cup drains to collapse riddle me this the mystery that holds it and of my secret flaw weeping wondering ever? |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
excellent. . . we all have these. . .  ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Gothkitty Junior Member
since 2001-02-05
Posts 32Australia |
interesting piece, enjoyed it much we all have our secret flaws, very nice job gk |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
In ever search of a Holy Grail..many many hugs for you. You are NOT alone. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
we all have secret flaws..love just happens to be mine........helen |
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