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Mystic Whispers |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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Soft whispers in the night haunt my dreams Entwining like vines of moonlight beams. They creep upon the velvet of my skin Playing me like the strings of a violin Painting the night with shadows of emotion Upon ebony linens of sheer devotion Silhouettes waltz, corridors of my mind Dream scape of stars in your eyes I find How did you find your way into my heart? Hiding in the chambers when we are apart Magically in the night sleeping beside me Lips kissing like the shore kisses the sea Lullaby whispers serenade the night Behind mystic dreams of golden moonlight A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I had to softly smile...we posted on the same wavelength only minutes apart...well done, my friend... |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Victoria, I love these soft caressing whispers. Beautifully penned. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Silhouettes waltz, corridors of my mind Dream scape of stars in your eyes I find How did you find your way into my heart? Hiding in the chambers when we are apart' I love these lines, Victoria! Beautifully romantic write! sp  ...if I ride these dreams to the Irish Sea, oh, even there, I know your heart rides with me... |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you Sunshine..yes ha..we were thinking along the same lines i guess.  Poeminister..thank you...and for peeking in tonight snowpants..thank you and I appreciate your comments. nice to hear from you ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Victoria, a lover's serenade surely to be played time and again. Robert Joseph [This message has been edited by Robert Joseph (edited 02-06-2001).] |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love this lovely penned piece.... wonderful done Charisma |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonderful Victoria. . .  ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you robert..charisma and sven...so nice to hear from all of you  ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
A truely enchanted lullaby! So peaceful... Lary |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Such beautiful whispers coming from you pen. Loved the feeling behind this one much. If you find yourself stranded in a storm ...then reach for my hand and we will play in the puddles together |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
soft, real feelings here, Victoria. Thank you! "I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Beautiful words Victoria, a pleasure to read. " I have seen without perceiving I have been another man Let me pierce the realm of glamour So I know just what I am"....Dweller on the Threshold, |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you lary..pleased you enjoyed thank you Mark..always nice to hear from you Kathleen..and thank you for reading hon Eddie..thank you very much, and for peeking in ~V~ Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. Pablo Picasso |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I know those haunts, and dreams...Victoria...I have always loved how you write...this is a favorite of mine, from you...be well... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Victoria~ this is so soft........love this -SEA |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you Lauren and Sea..so nice to hear from both of you..glad you enjoyed ~V~ Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. Pablo Picasso |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed this Victoria and miss you...James |
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