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State of Confusion
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State of Confusion |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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* NB this was inspired by PDV state of confusion listed in place of residence. I do not want anyone to think, I consider PDV to be even vaguely mad. It was just such a deliciously tempting place to be. in her state of confusion a dweller on the threshold of insanity that has no reality solution I want to believe my mind has gone to a place that's better for me a place of delusion, illusion and dream on the threshold of insanity I want to escape the fight of the real that pursues my mind full well knowing the cusp, I trepidly tread the barren place wherein I dwell I want to accept a shallow mind where things get lost therein insanity looms without a price and craziness something to win I want to be in a place of repute where others care for me the state of confusion, like Poet De Vine the threshold of insanity Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
see??? i TOLD you there were some insane people here.... hehe well done, kethry.... made me grin and smile and check dr. sven's appointment book to see who's scheduled for the next therapy session.... deVine isn't in there and neither are you... i strongly suggest you contact the Good Doc to make an appointment.....  |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Love it Kethry.....makes me smile wonderful read as always Charisma |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Ok, now I KNOW why I can't leave - we're all in the same boat Kethry, all this time I thought you were an Aussie girl...now I find out you live in a State of Confusion....(corny)  "I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
thank you doreen. . . yes Kethry, I strongly urge you to schedule an appointment soon. . .look what it did for doreen!! excellent. . . --------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Excellent writing, Kethry! I think this must be a very large state, as so many of us dwell there. I especially like the phrase "trepidly tread". I had to go back and read it several times, not because it was unclear, but because it is so original, and trips off the tongue so marvelously! Thanks for the smiles. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
ummmmmm pppssstttttttttt hey Kethry...hey girl...dont look now but the guys with the white coats and butterfly nets are only two steps behind ya!!!! LOL this is cute |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
I like this. I live in the capital of the state. Poeminister [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 02-06-2001).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
doreen, I'm feverishly searching through me diary now. Do you think Dr. Sven would mind 3am.? Charisma, Thanks for stopping by.The state is open for all citizens. Kathleen, I love it when you feed me corn. Sven, I've tried to make and appointment but your line is always busy. kcsgrandma, well there you go! I thought I was in a state of confusion instead I was tongue tripping. Paula, those men have been following me around since I posted poetspeak. poeminister, Aha so you live in Chaosreigns! Welcome to my part of the state. Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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emily Member
since 2000-10-03
Posts 142USA |
Enjoyed so much, what a nice change from my dreary day in the southwest!!! or maybe the East, heck I don't know |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is great, Kethry!!! Your descriptions of my mental abilities (or lack thereof) gave this gal a big grin! *S* |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kethry dear heart, as long as I can always find you love you can live where you wish. This is utterly utterly fabulous do I love this of course I do. You always manage to write just the right thing love. I think this is excellant. (I couldn't find anyhting to criticise love it is outstanding) Take care love as always Slushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Beverley Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 97England |
Kethry dear heart, Bev de Bump, making sure this goes around again. and you know I love this Wonderful absolutely perfect Take care love as always Slushy Bev de Bump Puck And while thy willing soul transpires At every pore with instant fire Andrew Marvell 1621-1678 |
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