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Secret Whisper
Member

since 2001-01-25

Posts 298
Through the Looking Glass

0 posted 2001-02-05 03:51 PM

So tired, oh so tired.
Weak with the fatigue of life.
Crushed under the weight of the world.
Oh to see only the starless void of the night.

Stars hide your hideous brilliance.
Oh to see only the abyss behind the shutters to my world.
Sweet, sweet respite.
Envelop me in your entangling arms.
Shining sun extinguish your repugnant warmth.
Let me drown in the eve's soul emancipating silence.

"Close your eyes, and you'll see. Cover your ears, and you'll hear."

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2001-02-05 04:29 PM

Wow Secret Whisper!
a dark dark poem to be read in the dark night of the soul. Well written. *HuGS*
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2001-02-05 09:02 PM

OK, OK, I promise....now, get some sleep!

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-02-05 09:33 PM

sleep well friend. . .

this is excellent. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Gothkitty
Junior Member

since 2001-02-05

Posts 32
Australia

4 posted 2001-02-05 09:55 PM

Excellent piece, very dark and inviting
Sleep now rest your head

gk

Sunlit Soul
Junior Member

since 2001-02-05

Posts 37
Never Land

5 posted 2001-02-05 10:04 PM

A dark, well written piece. I truly enjoyed the read!

"Every man dies. Not every man lives."
-Tim Robbins

WhiteKnight
Member

since 2001-01-01

Posts 83
NY

6 posted 2001-02-05 10:22 PM

Very well written. I really feel this poem.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2001-02-06 12:31 PM

SecretWhisper~
I liked the invitation to slumber in this line -
'Let me drown in the eve's soul emancipating silence.'
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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