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The Green Bay
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The Green Bay |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Green Bay We search the round of our toll In the abyss of our soul. In the shadows of our time In another life our prime. Passing through the dark of stain Where our early sins have lain Cut the bonds of hold and mold Hold your candle high and bold. Free the umbilical cord Take up your personal sword Vow to see the light of day Test in bray your feet of clay. It is a journey well spent Full of fire fume and vent. Human spirit is the shoal. And your survival the goal. Rage to see your green of bay Outrage is our sword in play. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...and your survival the goal... Indeed. Well done Sir! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Passing through the dark of stain Where our early sins have lain Cut the bonds of hold and mold Hold your candle high and bold. ===================== It is a journey well spent Full of fire fume and vent. Human spirit is the shoal. And your survival the goal. Rage to see your green of bay Outrage is our sword in play. =================== me thinks that Randy dragon is fanning the flames  "Passing through the dark of stain Where our early sins have lain" and that line is cooler than even YOU know very cool poem Sy-babes ... way cool...groovy even  rage on the page ... wisdom of sage *winkiewinkie*  Tomorrow holds only mystery And who's to say what might be But in you I've found a love so strong The sun and the moon look on in jealousy ~VH~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Karilea, Thank you for the well done. *L* JM, Randy dragon sends his love winkiewinkie Stinky |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
onward now brave souls. . . excellent Sy. . . ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Excellent write sir. Much to be said for moving forward with a desire and a passion to fight on no matter how battle weary we are. Makes me want to go in search of a dragon to slay (but not a randy one!! LOL) but then again cowboys don't hunt dragons so I will stick to my saddle and just mosey on along.  If you find yourself stranded in a storm ...then reach for my hand and we will play in the puddles together |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sven, Thanks for the excellent. Mark, Well then cosey moseying and thanks. |
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