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Koi, Emperor of Pond
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Koi, Emperor of Pond |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages 
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 Koi, Emperor of Pond He is the emperor of Pond And so easy to be fond of With his elegant grace Will he be praised Showing beautiful colours Losing myself for hours When I watch these creatures Wondrous gift of nature Living jewels from Japanese realm Always swimming majestic calm With names like Kohaku or Bekko Likewise Kinginrin and Tancho It depends how colours has been drawn Upon the body of Koi's underground White on red, or red on white Maybe some black for a lovely sight But what ever their colours will be They are real emperors for me. Charisma [This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 02-05-2001).] |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
I love the photo and the poem is delightful Hugs, ME |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
To lose oneself in a pond of koi . . . I know how that can work. Thanks for sharing. Interesting approach to end rhyming. Kraw' |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Mother Earth: thank you for your lovely comment krawdad: its an amazing feeling right, to watch these wonderful creatures I always enjoyed to observe them. thank you for you wonderful comment |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (giggles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo cute, sweet friend, I enjoy seeing this side of you, I love fish so much and we even have some koi in our pond and even some goldfish! (kiss on cheek) May this dynasty live on just as your gorgeous words always do, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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