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A Knight of Dreams
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A Knight of Dreams |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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He reached for me and took my hand imparting words which reminisced of past lives loves now found again and slowly bent down for a kiss. He took me into such strong arms we danced away into the night I felt him shelter me from harm I knew his love would make it right. The moon grew larger as we stepped the stars shone brighter with his touch my heart remembered secrets kept and knew the future held so much. This was no regular first date but rather a reunion made Here in his arms would pain abate together now, both unafraid. This love we both felt pre-ordained brought sun to all the days of rain. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I love this!!!! Oh Sandra, you knew that I would love this one didn't you??? It's wonderful. . . *sigh*. . . just perfect. . . This is wonderful. . . it's nice when the sun finally comes through isn't it?  ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Cat, I do so like this shade of you perhaps some more for us to view? for when you pen a poem this way you carefully bring the bright to day... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
catalinamoon - very nicely written with much tenderness that I sensed when reading. BC |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Now see how much beauty you can share when you find the right inspiration. It doesn't matter if it is a memory, a current event, or a dream as long as you find inspiration in it. What a beautiful piece of you to share with us. Truely well penned and spoken with the heart of one the knows where the search is to end. If you find yourself stranded in a storm ...then reach for my hand and we will play in the puddles together |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Warm and tender me friend. Loved the flow and growth of it. jwesley |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Catalina, This is a beautiful portrait of so many different emotions combined. You could never lose your inspiration... Love, Elise |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Beautifully penned. Enjoyed the read. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'This was no regular first date but rather a reunion made Here in his arms would pain abate together now, both unafraid.' Ahh...Sandra, I so know what you are saying here. Beautiful write! sp  ...if I ride these dreams to the Irish Sea, oh, even there, I know your heart rides with me... |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
what a tenderfully poem.....love it. great write. Charisma |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
A wonderful write Catalinamoon... I enjoyed reading your poem very much... ~coco~ You get a lot more lesson mileage when you lose in some situations than always win... |
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