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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2001-02-04 11:41 AM


A Few Spots Open    

I have been blessed with poetry
Met some zealots on the way
That danced the steps of symmetry
Whose company I would have stay.

The tune is blues infinitum
Deep and mellow on a cello.
Vibrating strings of sounds succumb
Filling desires bordello.

We fly together now and then
Through dragon lairs and greenery
Smoke pipe fills full of now and when
And wallow in the scenery.

We kiss each other through the day
Make future plans under the stars.
We use the moon to light our way
Making sure that this world is ours.

There's room here for a privileged few
But the you that join, must be you.


© Copyright 2001 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2001-02-04 01:10 PM


Seymour~
'Smoke pipe fills full of now and when
And wallow in the scenery.'


I'm wallowing with you ! !
Save me a place !
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Janet Marie
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2 posted 2001-02-04 01:13 PM


That danced the steps of symmetry
Whose company I would have stay.

The tune is blues infinitum
Deep and mellow on a cello.
===================
We fly together now and then
Through dragon lairs and greenery
=================

We kiss each other through the day
Make future plans under the stars.
We use the moon to light our way
Making sure that this world is ours.

There's room here for a privileged few
But the you that join, must be you.
===================

and all we need as our ticket to fly is poets pen and vision  
and I can think of few that Id rather fly with ....
than the "privileged few" here in poetry land ...
and a certain randy dragon
*winkiewinkie*
very cool poem SY-gator ... way cool ...
in fact its GROOVY

Tomorrow holds only mystery
And who's to say what might be
But in you I've found a love so strong
The sun and the moon look on in jealousy
~VH~

Irish Rose
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3 posted 2001-02-04 02:22 PM


This is a very meaningful poem, Seymour.

"I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis



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4 posted 2001-02-04 02:59 PM


And such a sincere, sweet sanctum it is....

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2001-02-04 04:24 PM


Marge,
One place saved. *L*

JM,
Ok first stop I'll fly you to the moon.
Winkiewinkie Stinky

Kathleen,
Thank you so much.

Sunshine,
One ticket to a sweet sanctum. *L*

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6 posted 2001-02-05 05:22 PM


*wondering* .....do I have a ticket too?.....

love it....love it.

excellent as always

Charisma

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7 posted 2001-02-06 06:33 PM


This was much enjoyed. Can I come?
Sandra


Dream as if you'll live forever; Live as if you'll die today.
— James Dean



Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2001-02-06 09:03 PM


Charisna,
You sure can.

Catalinamoon,
You can come with Chrisma.

Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2001-02-11 09:04 PM


Oh ... surely there's more room at the TOP !

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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10 posted 2001-02-11 09:17 PM


I wish you would publish a book seymour...reading your work soothes my mind!
Thank you so much for sharing your spirit with us!

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2001-02-12 10:58 AM


Marge,
There is always room at the top. *L*

Serenity,
And thank you for soothing my mind with your lovely answers.

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