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Charisma
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0 posted 2001-02-04 09:06 AM





Listen to the spirit of life

Listen how spirit of life murmurs in the air
Drift upon a stream of love and care
Within the heartbeat of nature's strife
Guiding the battle of how to survive
Searching balance between weak and strong
While harmony of life sighs along

Across the oceans, across the earth
Observing the wealth that makes it worth
To live on this planet that we borrow
For our children, future of tomorrow
Human beings have too much consequence
Detecting the failure of mankind's influence

Listen how spirit of life murmurs in the air
It's still not too late to show how you care
If you accept your responsibility
Among natures powerful plea
To respect all God's living creatures
Also with wealth of earth's features

When we walk with each other hand in hand
Listen with open heart to understand
The murmuring message from spirit of life
When she needs our concerns in her strife
Within the future of ourselves too
It will be aware as our due

Charisma





[This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 02-04-2001).]

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shawana
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1 posted 2001-02-04 11:20 AM


Hello Meis!
heb 't gelezen enne:.....;-))
VOND het HEEL prachtig!.....de eerste x ging ik het vluchtig lezen en 't toen maar ff copy/paste op kladje en het nu met meer aandacht gelezen.....;-)
Is echt goed....'t las heerlijk, zonder meer een van de beste zover..en bovendien is heel mooi gedaan!...eg! vooral met dat plaatje!...lijkt net toegang naar het paradijs sjeg!!!!..ach ach ach...;-)

Charisma my girl: This shows 'your STRIFE' to better yourself to NO bounds!
Your poetsistah says: 'Djempol'
THUMBS UP!



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2 posted 2001-02-04 10:36 PM


Beautiful!!! I'm going to put this in my library and would love to use it in an upcoming issue of the Newsletter..If I may?
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3 posted 2001-02-05 07:08 AM


Shawana: thanks you my poetsistah....for the "djempol", glad you love this one, and the graphic is indeed a door to paradise....that's the name of it, and made by Jim Warren...  

Poet DeVine: Well thank you for the honour to put this one in your library, and offcourse you may use it for the newsletter aswell....I am really happily suprised to know that you find these one good enough for the newsletter....I am very honoured.

Charisma

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4 posted 2001-02-09 08:24 PM


Bumpintine
Bumpintine
Won't a bump
be mighty fine
Another trip
around the forum
cause I think
it's awful boring
without a little
bump or two
Here's one from me
just for you!

Happy Bumpintine!


Are we having fun yet?

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5 posted 2001-02-09 11:55 PM


Wonderfully done Charisma!!   -SEA
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6 posted 2001-02-10 01:08 PM


Thank you for the Bump......stumperdabumper  

Sea: thank you my friend for your lovely comment.

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