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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC 
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"Lovemaking" Soft glow of moon streams through open window Exposing your silouette The sheer beauty of you nearly takes my breath away As I feel the pulse of my heart quicken Slowly you awake As our eyes meet in that one moment of time Those pools of blue beckon me to come closer A knowing smile spreads across your lips I walk over to the bed You reach your hand out to me Joining next to you, our bodies touch As skin meets skin, passions releasing Our breathing and heartbeat become as one Sounds of our lovemaking fill the night air I stare deep in your eyes As desire overcomes the two of us Quietly afterwards we lay in one another's arms Listening to your breathing I fall asleep Together we awake in love as the morning sun rises Amy M. Kennedy "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart and can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Our breathing and heartbeat become as one Sounds of our lovemaking fill the night air I stare deep in your eyes As desire overcomes the two of us Quietly afterwards we lay in one another's arms Listening to your breathing I fall asleep Together we awake in love as the morning sun rises' Wow, Aims...this is absolutely beautiful! Wonderful picture you've painted for us here! You're one heck of a writer, my dear friend! I love this! -e ~~~~~24/7 ...if I ride these dreams to the Irish Sea, oh, even there, I know your heart rides with me... |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Very sensual and romantic. Wonderful write. Poeminister |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Beautiful work Amy. " I have seen without perceiving I have been another man Let me pierce the realm of glamour So I know just what I am"....Dweller on the Threshold, |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Amy love, absolutely a stunning piece from you. How this piece glows with quality and beauty, and it is so superb. Absolutely fabulous writing, your very real love shines through this love it really does. One of your real treasures. Thank you for writing this love, it is simply outstanding. Really wonderfully brilliant writing Take care love as always Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
thank you everyone for your very sweet and sincere replies. as always its wonderful to be able to post in such a warm and loving "home". thanks to you all for everything you do! take care amy  "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart and can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Amy, you know that I loved this one. . . it's perfect. . . absolutely perfect. . . *sigh*. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Amy, this is heaven-written.... "I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis |
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