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Title Suggestions Please
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Title Suggestions Please |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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Two little other worldlies sitting on my shoulder They sing, “Name that boy, he’s only getting older” The angel whispers, “Peter” or “Paul” for the child The devil says, “But no, we gotta name him something wild.” Don’t name him something that just will not go With the singing of the song “banana fanna fo…” If you name him Billy Bob then make payments on a truck If her initials spell out EZ then that’ll be her luck Or you could name him Humphrey. Oh, what a name And when someone hogs a cigarette that would be his fame Sometimes naming a baby is like magnetic poetry All the names of ancestors, which ones will it be I got to name my baby to my wife I give her thanks Nothing like Seymour Butts or even Rob A. Banks I got to name my baby, no really it was a breeze But if we ever have quadruplets, TITLE SUGGESTIONS PLEASE! You know the "Never Ending Story"? They're still telling it! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
LOL Walt...how about Daryl...and my other brother Daryl...teehee...hmmmm a title...well the first thing that popped into my head was the name game HAHAHA probably because of your banana fana bo...no no seriously...how about...the quest for identity? |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
Thanks for your reply Paula hehehe I don't really need a title. But i dragged you in here didn't I. thanky!! You know the "Never Ending Story"? They're still telling it! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
How about George? LOLOLLOLOLOL |
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cruz Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 282Dallas,Texas USA |
pretty cool...the subject matter sounds familiar. quite clever |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Glad to see you really don't need a name, I might have suggested "Anything but Sue" |
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elisaseyes Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 196fort worth texas |
Helping my hubby out ain't it grand? I found this quite amusing. |
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USBZoso Junior Member
since 2001-02-05
Posts 20 |
this was actually the first poem worth reading in this forum |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Anything but Sue for a boy!....or Beverly!...you provided a good laugh Walt....thanks, I needed that! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is great, Walt! Thanks for the grins! *S* |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
hehehe what's funny is I thought about putting the boy named sue thing in there thank you all |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
love this, your poems are always worth reading  nice work walt |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
This was so much fun! It took me back to when I was pregnant with my first son and my husband and I DO NOT agree on any names! I am lucky both my children were boys, because had I had a girl,, she still wouldn't have a name! Picking names is more stressful than most people think, eh? LOL, With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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Secret Whisper Member
since 2001-01-25
Posts 298Through the Looking Glass |
Hee hee hee. I found this very amuzing. A nice change of pace. You are a very talented writer. My compliments. ~Alison~ "Close your eyes, and you'll see. Cover your ears, and you'll hear." |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Dear Walt I cannot hide the truth I cannot grin and bear it. For if you name your baby thus, he'll only fuss, I swear it! Don't mind what shoulder sitters say! Pay no attention yonder. You name that kid your Way Out way but don't take long to ponder! So, careful with that baby's name, oh yes, you're right on track. For if you name him somethin' wild he'll call you wild names back! (o: Claire |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Why, Walt JR, of course! Cor |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
Walt JR it is for all your boys and girls!!! Thank you all!!! You know the "Never Ending Story"? They're still telling it! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Walty, I can't wait to read your next WAYOUT poem dear I enjoyed this very much, very clever. Keep writing!! Maree |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thanks DA next time who knows |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
How about "Magnamic Poetry"?....  |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
if only i knew what that meant?? |
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