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Mantilla Graced |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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 Mantilla Graced soft cinnamon eyes of lovely, fair senorita auburn hair angelically hid by lace mantilla when presented to her by fiancé smitten to wear before the heavens as it is written nothing could be woven, nor more beautifully grace a woman's visage, than a lovely mantilla of lace 02.03.01 Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Lovely, don't think I could improve on this. Enjoyed it very much. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
now... THIS is simonized... !! and illustrated with flare and grace.... i love it...  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Much too beautiful to lay on page 4 already. LOVELY, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
What a graceful picture (the photo is nice too!) Love it, Sunshine! Lary |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari dear heart, what can I say, the Sun shines again, with joy and seen through lace. I love this one utterly totally wonderful.  Take care love as always Majestic Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sunshine, Simply beautiful writing. The picture is stunning. They compliment each other well. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Sunshine- Elegant vision. Nicely done. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Elegance defined.......very beautifully written by you. If you find yourself stranded in a storm ...then reach for my hand and we will play in the puddles together |
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