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KokoStewartKoomoa
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Waikiki, Hawaii

0 posted 2001-02-03 09:48 PM





seekers of the corn
watching from afar
opportunities

garden sentinel
strawman acting as strongman
wind-puppet watchman
blackbirds circle overhead
waiting for guard to sleep



Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



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Mother_Earth
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since 2000-11-20
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1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan
1 posted 2001-02-03 10:08 PM


I love this and can "see" the scarecrow trying not to sleep so the crows will stay out of the field. It feels good.  Hugs, ME
KokoStewartKoomoa
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since 2000-12-04
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Waikiki, Hawaii
2 posted 2001-02-03 10:39 PM


It looks like he had to dance to stay awake..hehehehe Thanks for the kind comments!

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



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