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SEA
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0 posted 2001-02-03 09:40 PM



He took me
With a fierceness…………………..that left me speechless
Raging passion unable to tame………………I heard him calling, calling out my name
Almost a desperate need…………………voice harsh with greed


He took me
But he gave so much……………………..waves of pleasure in his touch
Heat pouring from fingertips…………………wicked kisses from his lips
Taken quickly to heaven up high……………….now we lay together
contented in sigh

(yes............he took me)


~SEA~

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Poeminister
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1 posted 2001-02-03 09:50 PM


SEA--
Sounds like bliss.  Love it.

Poeminister

"...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls-
O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love."
-Poe



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2 posted 2001-02-03 09:53 PM


SEA...and YOU have just taken ME....to beautiful thoughts !!  
jwesley
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3 posted 2001-02-03 10:01 PM


Nice visuals SEA...hmmm.

jwesley

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
4 posted 2001-02-03 10:17 PM


SEA - when I read this I felt the many passions that you have written about. I loved this writing of yours.

BC

KokoStewartKoomoa
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5 posted 2001-02-03 10:46 PM


hmmmmm better than choclate too! enjoyed this sensual delight....
thanks!!!

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



doreen peri
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6 posted 2001-02-03 10:55 PM


you've taken me, too  
Janet Marie
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7 posted 2001-02-03 11:46 PM


mmm mmm mmm
desired and inspired ...
you know Im loving this one...
format and same line rhyme ...
and the imagery aint half bad either   hehe
very cool Sea-girlie ...
love seeing ya playing with poetry(and your muse)
later-taken-gator
jm

Tomorrow holds only mystery
And who's to say what might be
But in you I've found a love so strong
The sun and the moon look on in jealousy
~VH~

finetwine
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8 posted 2001-02-03 11:49 PM


That was a real nice piece...I liked it...
Paula Finn
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missouri
9 posted 2001-02-04 12:10 PM


Sea...mmmm mmmmm girl to be taken like this...wow...and I supposed you expect me to SLEEP tonight?
Elizabeth Cor
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10 posted 2001-02-04 12:23 PM


I really don't know how to describe this without using the word power. Nothing shocking, but this beating in my chest and up through my shoulders and throat...

                    He took me
But he gave so much

This transition began the light explosion, and now I can't seem to shake it. Thanks.

~Beth

EagleOne
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11 posted 2001-02-04 03:08 AM


Wow! Great work here, I love it.

" I have seen without perceiving
I have been another man
Let me pierce the realm of glamour
So I know just what I am"....Dweller on the Threshold,

snowpants
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12 posted 2001-02-04 07:40 AM


Whew...excellently penned, SEA!  You've definitely given us some great imagery here!  Love it!
I really love the style too!

sp  


...if I ride these dreams to the Irish Sea,
oh, even there, I know your heart rides with me...


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Sunshine
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13 posted 2001-02-04 07:44 AM


Whew....

Irish Rose
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14 posted 2001-02-04 09:26 AM


this should happen to every woman!  wow!

"I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis



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15 posted 2001-02-04 09:37 AM


love it.....oh my....what a stunning ride....oops...write.
enjoyed it a lot

Charisma


SEA
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16 posted 2001-02-04 11:16 AM


PM~ thank you for the "bliss"   and the love it  

Balladeer~ thank you!  

JWesley~ glad you could see..........

BC~ that's very nice, thank you  

Koko~chocolate is pretty darn good, but yea, I thought it was better too  

DP~  glad you liked this  

Janet~you actually inspire me to play with poetry........you use so many different styles and always present your poems so beautifully, I'm happy you liked this!  

Finetwine~ thank you  

Paula~ just have sweet dreams............

Elizabeth C~wow, loved your reply, thank you  

Eagle One~thanks!  

SP~ thank you very much  

Sunshine~ ahem.............

Kathleen~ I definately agree!!  

Charisma~ So glad you enjoyed the ride....I mean write  

~SEA

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17 posted 2001-02-04 03:14 PM


I love the way you wrote this. We are able to get the picture completly without out needless details. I will be looking for more of your poetry.
Jill
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18 posted 2001-02-04 04:15 PM


Speechless......definitely.
This is great!!!!!

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
19 posted 2001-02-04 04:23 PM


And the thunder rolls through the soul.  What a treat to read from you.  Such power and vigor in this little piece of yours.

If you find yourself stranded in a storm
...then reach for my hand and we will play in the puddles together

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20 posted 2001-02-04 04:54 PM


Sea~...Woohooooo what  a read this sunday afternoon.... I enjoyed  your words much...   be well...




Greeneyes~




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"Within you I lose myself
Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."
-Unknown



jonmcm
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21 posted 2001-02-04 05:14 PM



Sea,

Hot stuff; too hot for a Sunday in the UK!

Cheers!
Jon

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