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In The Spaces Between
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In The Spaces Between |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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 In The Spaces Between In those gaps filled with a soft sigh In the spaces between you and I Where looking hard I can see What is this loves mystery? This the quiet time of us Flowing with no fuss This is the time To feel fine To hear A tear Sigh Fly I Fly High Beauty Calls me Out of night It frees my flight Lifts voice in song Lying where I belong Feelings of quiet’s peace Touching brings souls release Held in these spaces here between Where beauty is heard & truth is seen Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Quite a feat...all those time-related statements in this creative form. Well done! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I loved this Marsha...how aptly you wrote of the "easy" moment...nice, nice work here!!!! You are writing deliciously these days. " Only those who risk going too far can possibly find out how far one can go." T.S. Eliot |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Look at you, look at you! A masterpiece that will be [ahem] timeless! LOL...couldn't help myself....ah Marsha, what it is to watch someone come in, saying "I can only read, I cannot write a whit" and then watch the wings spread... you make everyone here VERY proud for I think many of us feel you've been quite the protege!... hugs my friend....and how is Puck? |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
You said you couldn't write??? Unbelievable! This just proves how wrong you were! Keep it up.  To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marsha~ I'M SO PROUD OF YOU ! ! ! ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Marsha, Wonderful, just wonderful, very much enjoyed this gem. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
VAS love, thank you truly, it is so nice of you to say so, and I do appreciate you reading this and taking the time to reply. Take care love as always Mushy  Serenity love, thank you, that is a compliment from you that I don't deserve. My mentors have been working so hard to make my writing at least readable. So the credit goes to them really. Thank you muchly Take care love Mushy Kari dear heart, do you recognise these words that you dropped? I thought you might. And the compliments should go to you and the others for firstly fitting the wings, and then making me stretch them. Thank you love for it all Take care love as always Majestic puckish Marsha All that I am and all I can now do Is because I was taught how by you Marilyn love, thank you, but the compliments definitely don't belong to me. This came from some words Kari dropped and not wishing them to go to waste, I used them. It's a bit like giving a child some left over pastry and they make jam tarts. They are jam tarts, but you wouldn't really serve them in place of your own would you? Thank you Take care love Mushy Margie girl, thank you dear heart, and if you hadn't showed me how I would still be wondering. I thank you for all the help and the endless hours of toil and trouble. And thank you for shaking out my wings too Take care love as always Mushy Cerenity love, Thank you so very very muchly, finally my mentors get some work out of me. But don't they have to work hard to get it Thank you again Take care love Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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