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On the Rocks Again---not what your thinking...;o}
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On the Rocks Again---not what your thinking...;o} |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
On the Rocks Again Virginia Salter here we are on the rocks again staring out to sea waves lap at our toes again as you press your arm ‘round me the gulls sing a lullaby as sun sinks into the deep crimson clouds seem steamy now as night’s call begins its creep rhinestones, diamonds, crystal stones sparkle, twinkle fantasy solitude and peacefulness caress both you and me a distant trombone of the night alerts the earth about beneath the glow of Fresnel lens “When near the rocks, look out!” © August 3, 2000 |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Nice to be staring out to sea from the rocks with your love Romantic piece! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Thanks, insect. I had fun doing the opposite of what 'on the rocks' usually means in a relationship. ;o} |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very good, Virginia! Creative twist to the usual meaning of those words! I enjoyed this very much! |
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