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ellie LeJeune
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0 posted 2001-02-03 10:17 AM


The mountains call Your Name
as in valleys of Springtime Song.
Sweet melodies of Your wonder.
A chorus of moonbeams radiate
songs of joy to the rising moon
and the setting sun rejoices
at the EvenSong of the starshine.
The Galaxies herald the Archangelic
Choir of praise to Your Holy Love,
and the earth abounds with song.
Ocean to ocean, their mighty depths
filled to overflowing with creation,
made of Your ever bountiful Hands.
Songs of seaward breezes symphony
are heard, sweet angelic melodies,
that swell to heights of adoration.
Why not then, does every man
bend his knee to You?


A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.


[This message has been edited by ellie LeJeune (edited 02-03-2001).]

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Denise
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1 posted 2001-02-03 11:00 AM


Beautifully done, Ellie! Yes, indeed, why don't they?
kcsgrandma
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2 posted 2001-02-03 11:14 AM


Ellie, all I can say is WOW!  What a gorgeous psalm you have written here!  It reminds me of some of my favorites.  Well done!  hugs

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

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3 posted 2001-02-03 02:48 PM


This is beautiful Ellie. I'm going to put it into my library and want you to submit it to the newsletter when we do our 'nature' themed poetry!  
Janet Marie
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4 posted 2001-02-03 04:21 PM


A chorus of moonbeams radiate
songs of joy to the rising moon
and the setting sun rejoices
at the EvenSong of the starshine.
The Galaxies herald the Archangelic
Choir of praise to Your Holy Love,
and the earth abounds with song.
Ocean to ocean, their mighty depths
filled to overflowing with creation,
made of Your ever bountiful Hands.
Songs of seaward breezes symphony
are heard, sweet angelic melodies,
that swell to heights of adoration.
Why not then, does every man
bend his knee to You?
=====================
why indeed ...
wonderful writing Ellie...
this lovely inspiring piece showcases your gift of imagery and writing natures gifts.
and its a joy to see your name here  
just beautiful poetess!!

If my slight Muse do please these curious days ...
The pain be mine ...
but thine shall be the praise.

~Shakespeare~


snowpants
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5 posted 2001-02-03 07:50 PM


Yes, it is a wonder, isn't it?  Beautifully written, ellie!

sp  


...if I ride these dreams to the Irish Sea,
oh, even there, I know your heart rides with me...

Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2001-02-03 08:17 PM


Ellie~
Just lovely.
~*Marge*~


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deleeme
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7 posted 2001-02-04 10:57 PM


Ellie, This poem just radiates with beautiful efflugence and, as well calculated make one want to just shout out, "Praise God,Praise God!"
  Very lovely indeed,
         David


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8 posted 2001-02-05 08:36 AM


Lovely verse and I loved the last question, why indeed?  

"I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis



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