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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2001-02-03 08:10 AM


Hearts in Love

Hearts in love swing pendulum
From highs to sighs to highs
Candle night with auras light
Paint worded butterflies.

Harvest magic from the stars
Warp mystic into shrouds
Wish valleys to greenery
Make rainbows out of clouds.

Wear fineries net of due
Play fairies in the dawn.
Forgive the worlds blind justice
And dance upon the thorns.

See the world a different sight
Through colors in the dark
Muse kings and queens, lovers dreams
Beyond our finite stark.

There is a touch in all of us
It's all within our omnibus.


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1 posted 2001-02-03 08:22 AM


Good morning Sy....this....this....this is going into my library, but you knew that when you wrote it, didn't you? {~,^}....I'm so glad you're the sharing kind....

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2 posted 2001-02-03 08:48 AM


ooops posted twice....sorry  

[This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 02-03-2001).]

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3 posted 2001-02-03 08:48 AM


how I love these wonderful lines......your pen flows allways with grace and beauty, excellent as always my friend.

((hugs))
Charisma

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4 posted 2001-02-03 09:08 AM


Hearts in love swing pendulum
From highs to sighs to highs
Candle night with auras light
Paint worded butterflies.

Harvest magic from the stars
Make rainbows out of clouds.
==========================
Forgive the worlds blind justice
And dance upon the thorns.

See the world a different sight
Through colors in the dark
Muse kings and queens, lovers dreams
Beyond our finite stark.

There is a touch in all of us
It's all within our omnibus.
=================================


"Forgive the worlds blind justice
And dance upon the thorns.

See the world a different sight
Through colors in the dark"


and now I know... that you know ...
and now ... what I already knew is "official" ...
you too are a butterfly.
and since my words are lacking at the moment..
I will simply but very sincerely say ...
thank you and love you my sweet winkiewinkie
me





~Butterfly~
by Candlebox

Some people will find subtlety in strangers...
some will find subtlety alone,
and if you find everything ...
like you're looking for...
if you find
anything ...let me in...
Your eyes...you see everything,
my eyes...I see its all together now, and I know.

Butterfly, fly home, fly away, fly home...
and I'll raise my head up...and I'll raise my arms up
and let you fly home...
flutter on, your beautiful...
flutter on... your free...

Raise your wings up, shed this shell off-
Flutter on --your beautiful,
If I know what is real-
If what I know is all...
then I know that we're dying,
but your dying beautiful...
flutter on-- your so beautiful...
and I see you in my eyes,
and I feel you in my skin,
and I walk in my world, searching...
and I feel that we are dying...dying to be free...

~Butterflies are meant to be free~



Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2001-02-03 12:28 PM


Karilea,
Thank you for the flattery. *L*

Charisma,
Thank you for the excellent.

JM,
Love you too my winkiewinkie butterfly.
Yout poem is beautiful and flies like a
butterfly. Love ya

Janet Marie
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6 posted 2001-02-03 03:32 PM


I forgot to put this in my butterfly library
*winkiewinkie*

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7 posted 2001-02-03 03:39 PM


Beautiful Sy...simply beautiful!
Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2001-02-03 05:14 PM


Poet deVine,
I thank you for your devine comment. *L*

Mark Bohannan
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9 posted 2001-02-04 11:50 AM


I must say that this one is filled with so much vision into a realm that so many of us don't understand that I can't help but feel as if you have found some sort of devine knowledge into the power that comes with the true sharing of hearts and souls.  Excellent write sir........more so than that but I don't have the proper superlative to describe the feeling in this one.  

If you find yourself stranded in a storm
...then reach for my hand and we will play in the puddles together

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2001-02-04 07:27 PM


Mark,
You do pertty good a very nice comp. I thank you and the poem thanks you. Sy

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11 posted 2001-02-05 11:01 AM


Exquisite. You are such a lovely man.
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12 posted 2001-02-05 12:42 PM


This is another gem, Seymour... Beautiful!
Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2001-02-05 03:03 PM


Why thank you Serenity, I think your special too.

Suthern,
Thank you sweety, from one gem to another. *L*

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